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| Comment # | Document (Policy / MRPS) | Document line / reference | Proposed Change or Query | Proposer / Affiliation | Candidate response |
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| 1 | Policy | all pages | Please add page numbers to the document, if possible | Mario Reale/GÈANT | |
| 2 | Policy | page 19 | Between items 3.2 and 3.3 there is an "If" a the beginning of 3.3. that is shared/mixed up. Clearly a typo | Mario Reale/GÈANT | |
| 3 | Policy | page 13 | Section 4.2.4: please add a reference the ngREN webiste URL (hyperlink in the digital document) | Mario Reale/GÈANT | |
| 4 | Policy | page 8 | Section 4.3: please make it an hyperlink inside the digital document | Mario Reale/GÈANT | |
| 5 | Policy | page 14 | Section 5.1.1: "he governing body" should be "The governing body" | Mario Reale/GÈANT | |
| 6 | Policy | In section 5, there should be on the website, correctly - it's just that the how to join as a SP is not in the policy document). | I think there is no section on how to join the federation as a Service Provider | Mario Reale/GÈANT | |
| 7 | Policy | Definition & Terminology - NgRENID | Probably a typo, but the description doesn't match the terminology. Shouldn't it be NgRENIF? | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |
| 8 | Policy | all pages | Font and layout consistency. | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |
| 9 | Policy | All pages | Using bullets instead of subparagraphs (e.g 3.1.1) improves readability. | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |
| 10 | Policy | Introduction | Unnecessary use of numbered paragraphs | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |
| 11 | Policy | 3.1.12; 3.2.7; 3.4.6 | How would this process workworks? Also wrt 3.2.7 and 3.4.6? | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |
| 12 | Policy | 3.2.4 | Typo NGREN → NgREN | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |
| 13 | Policy | 3.5.2 | Is this optional (should) or obligatory (must)? | Casper Dreef/GÉANT | |