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Comment #	Document (Policy / MRPS)	Document line / reference	Proposed Change or Query	Proposer / Affiliation
1	Policy	all pages	Please add page numbers to the document, if possible	Mario Reale/GÈANT
2	Policy	page 19	Between items 3.2 and 3.3 there is an "If" a the beginning of 3.3. that is shared/mixed up. Clearly a typo	Mario Reale/GÈANT
3	Policy	page 13	Section 4.2.4: please add a reference the ngREN webiste URL (hyperlink in the digital document)	Mario Reale/GÈANT
4	Policy	page 8	Section 4.3: please make it an hyperlink inside the digital document	Mario Reale/GÈANT
5	Policy	page 14	Section 5.1.1: "he governing body" should be "The governing body"	Mario Reale/GÈANT
6	Policy	In section 5, there should be a distinction about how to join as a HO (IdP) and how to join as a Service Provider (this part is missing entirely from the document). These 2 sections should also be available from the federation website. (they are there on the website, correctly - it's just that the how to join as a SP is not in the policy document).	I think there is no section on how to join the federation as a Service Provider	Mario Reale/GÈANT
7	Policy	Definition & Terminology - NgRENID	Probably a typo, but the description doesn't match the terminology. Shouldn't it be NgRENIF?	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
8	Policy	all pages	Font and layout consistency.	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
9	Policy	All pages	Using bullets instead of subparagraphs (e.g 3.1.1) improves readability.	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
10	Policy	Introduction	Unnecessary use of numbered paragraphs	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
11	Policy	3.1.12; 3.2.7; 3.4.6	How would this process works? Also wrt 3.2.7 and 3.4.6?	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
12	Policy	3.2.4	Typo NGREN → NgREN	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
13	Policy	3.5.2	Is this optional (should) or obligatory (must)?	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
14	Policy	5.2	Will there be a standard termination period?	Casper Dreef/GÉANT
15	Policy	6.2.8	Specify "neither party"	Casper Dreef/GÉANT

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